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Gattison Admin
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| Subject: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Fri Jun 22, 2012 8:48 pm | |
| So, basically this is intended to be a shorter NPC description. I used the Dark Ages books' method of giving just a few essential traits and that's it, because that's all I think this NPC needs to be useful to an ST. What I want to do with this is extend it to maybe 3 or 4 paragraphs, but make it so that basically any other NPC could the Casuli in disguise--as in the Casuli's real identity is unknown or unimportant (as far as inspiring a good Story goes, anyway).
The Casuli Possibly a Cainite of unknown generation, sire unknown (if any), walker on an unknown Road Nature: unknown, possibly Enigma Demeanor: Monster/Capitalist Embrace: unknown, possibly the 17th or 18th Centuries Apparent Age: indeterminable The Casuli is a mysterious figure that appears randomly in Lasombra-heavy kindred populaces and rarely in cities known to be inhabited by the reclusive Kiasyd. He wears a black cloak, keeps his face constantly hidden in shadows, and is known for being extremely enigmatic and unsettling during interactions with others. His main goal is the accumulation of all Abyssal lore he can find, including knowledge on Abyss Mysticism. He is said to be an unprecedented master of Obtenebrous powers, able to conjure items from shadows and summon (or banish) almost anything he wants into the Abyss. When pressed in physical confrontations, he also displays a modest level of familiarity with Necromancy, and has been known to summon corpse slaves directly from the shadows to fight for him. The latter, however, is something few people, if any, know, as rarely does one survive a conflict with the Casuli.
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| Subject: Re: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:26 pm | |
| Okay, this is an interesting concept. I'd extend the description with stories of a few survivors of encounters with the Casuli, or even some more rumors.
Also, explaining how exactly he accumulates abyssal knowledge might be helpful. Does this mean he destroys Abyss Mystics who resist him? Is he aggressive, stealing abyssal books? Or he simply talks?
One way of keeping things interesting and open is saying that he does a little of everything, being gentle and civilized, quietly exchanging ideas on a encounter with a vampire, and known to have destroyed and stolen everything belonging to another vampire.
Perhaps more clearly hinting that he might not be a vampire, but perhaps a ghost or other creature might be interesting.
Also, if his possible Embrace is the 17th or 18th Centuries, then that means there's no report of his activities before, right? Is there a particular reason you chose so? | |
| | | Gattison Admin
Posts : 306 Join date : 2012-06-03 Age : 44 Location : New England, USA
| Subject: Re: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:53 pm | |
| I like what you're thinking, it's pretty much the direction I was intending to take here, so that's very good.
I would actually like to clearly hint that he may not even be a Cainite, but was wondering if that was too similar to the Capuchin. I say fuggit though, people will think it's cool or cheesy, but will realize that every clan can have their own "Capuchin/Casuli" type.
As for the "possible" date of his Embrace, I was actually planning on working in some kind of angle where the "name" Casuli doesn't appear until around the 17th or 18th Centuries, although, when all is said and done, there is no clear evidence that this character did not go by another name previously, either, so nothing can be nailed down as fact.
This is supposed to be one of those frustratingly vague characters that is supposed to make the reader believe that we have some HUGE conspiracy involving this character.... y'know... if our writing skills are up to it and all, lol. | |
| | | Anda
Posts : 174 Join date : 2012-06-21 Age : 40 Location : Sweden
| Subject: Re: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Mon Jun 25, 2012 3:41 am | |
| I think I understand what you are aiming for with this character, but in my opinion it is not enough as it is now. Like Valis said, is he hostile or friendly? Is he a thief or a trader? Is there anything more to this guy than just a loose concept? With that being said, I think you can make this concept into a really cool one, God knows you got the mind and the writing skills for it. I really recommend you to read about "Anne of Lilies" on page 74 in Victorian Age:Companion. I think that story can inspire you and show you another way to go about this kind of mysterious NPC. | |
| | | Gattison Admin
Posts : 306 Join date : 2012-06-03 Age : 44 Location : New England, USA
| Subject: Final Draft? Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:37 am | |
| So, I added a bit to it, what do we think now? I'm kinda tired now, so what did I miss? - The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss:
Possibly a Cainite of unknown generation, sire unknown (if any), walker on an unknown Road Nature: unknown, possibly Enigma Demeanor: Monster or Capitalist Embrace: unknown, possibly the 16th or 17th Centuries Apparent Age: indeterminable The Casuli is a mysterious figure that appears randomly in Lasombra-heavy kindred populaces and rarely in cities known to be inhabited by the reclusive Kiasyd. He wears a black cloak, keeps his face constantly hidden in shadows—none who have met him and lived to tell of it have ever seen his eyes, or knows if he even truly has any—and is known for being extremely enigmatic and unsettling during interactions with others. When heard of at all, he is known for his bartering, purchasing, stealing, threatening and even violence (or any, seemingly random combination of the above), all in order to get whatever it is that he may claim to want from those he bothers to speak with. Some say he's obviously a boon to Abyss Mystics, offering whatever help he can, others say they know—or used to know—a mystic of the Abyss, until they tried to do business with the Casuli, that is. Still others claim he's neither friend nor foe, but simply uninterested in the affairs of others, while even more swear he's nothing more than a rather embarrassing “urban legend” as it were. If all recorded and gossiped accounts of the Casuli were to be drawn together (a virtually impossible feat, considering the rarity of the Casuli himself and the lack of those willing to discuss such shadowy characters in the first place), he would appear as one driven, perhaps even possessed (by some accounts), to pursue and collect all Abyssal lore for himself—and himself alone. Yet at the same time, he would also appear as one whose actions and methods were as predictable as the flight of a moth, casting seemingly random threats, accusations, gratitude and even rewards around without any apparent rhyme or reason. In some regions he was reported to have been equally benevolent and demanding or unreasonable, while in others he seems as if he would have been willing to do anything just for a solid lead on whatever it was he was looking for. His name would date back to the 1600, or perhaps even earlier, yet Abyss mystics who have done their research might be aware that other, similar figures and beings have existed for at least another five centuries beforehand—possibly even throughout all portions of history in which existed the Discipline of Obtenebration. To make things even more interesting, in another 50-100 years, those same regions would be reporting altogether different results. Even if one were to achieve the Methuselean feat of correlating all sightings and dealings with this mysterious envoy of shadowy knowledge, one would probably still be just as clueless as to his true goals. Yes, his main goal seems to be the accumulation of all Abyssal lore he can find, including, but not limited to, knowledge on Abyss Mysticism—but to what end? What is the end result the Casuli seeks? What does the strange, shadowy figure actually search for in all those texts he acquires? When mystics start piecing the puzzle together, the minds of the ignorant fail to comprehend the significance of the greater picture and look away in their shame, back to the bleak traps of existence they call lives (or unlives). Said to be an unprecedented master of Obtenebrous powers, able to conjure items from shadows and summon (or banish) almost anything he wants into the Abyss. As for those who claim to have outright defied or attacked him... there are none currently spreading such foolhardy lies openly, but every now and then, amongst the proper circles, a rumor or two will arise of one who claims just such a thing. Any attempts to find these individuals and corroborate their stories would most likely turn up completely fruitless, however. When pressed in physical confrontations, rumors and stories suggest he also displays a modest level of familiarity with Necromantic-like abilities, and has been known to summon corpse slaves directly from the shadows to fight for him. The latter, however, is something few people, if any, know, as rarely does one survive a conflict with the Casuli.
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| | | Anda
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| Subject: Re: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:56 am | |
| I liked it much better now. I think that the Necromancy-powers are unnecessary since we already have heaps of NPCs with necromancy and we might wanna be careful so we dont send out the signals that most Abyss Mystics have necromancy or needs necromancy to be considered cool. But that's just what I think and if u wanna keep it, then go for it. Yeah but like I said, I like it much better now and I think it's a cool NPC to have in the book. I've actually been playing with the idea of using Laguna de la sombra as his haven, an idea that I don't know if I will go through with since the idea is very vague at the moment. . | |
| | | Gattison Admin
Posts : 306 Join date : 2012-06-03 Age : 44 Location : New England, USA
| Subject: Re: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:15 pm | |
| - Anda wrote:
- I liked it much better now. I think that the Necromancy-powers are unnecessary since we already have heaps of NPCs with necromancy and we might wanna be careful so we dont send out the signals that most Abyss Mystics have necromancy or needs necromancy to be considered cool. But that's just what I think and if u wanna keep it, then go for it.
Yeah, I was wondering about that, too. - Quote :
- I've actually been playing with the idea of using Laguna de la sombra as his haven, an idea that I don't know if I will go through with since the idea is very vague at the moment. .
That's a great idea, actually, I like it. I think you should go for it... and if it happens to not fit with his story, then we can make it a "rumor" instead of "truth." | |
| | | Gattison Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss Mon Aug 13, 2012 11:56 pm | |
| This should be The One... What do we think now? Done? Any final suggestions or ideas or complaints? One last chance.... EDIT: btw, I changed the very last paragraph only this time around. I hopefully left room for allowing Necromancy, but left it vague enough where it could also be a form of possession through the Abyss or something. - The Casuli, Avatar of the Abyss:
Possibly a Cainite of unknown generation, sire unknown (if any), walker on an unknown Road Nature: unknown, possibly Enigma Demeanor: Monster or Capitalist Embrace: unknown, possibly the 16th or 17th Centuries Apparent Age: indeterminable The Casuli is a mysterious figure that appears randomly in Lasombra-heavy kindred populaces and rarely in cities known to be inhabited by the reclusive Kiasyd. He wears a black cloak, keeps his face constantly hidden in shadows—none who have met him and lived to tell of it have ever seen his eyes, or knows if he even truly has any—and is known for being extremely enigmatic and unsettling during interactions with others. When heard of at all, he is known for his bartering, purchasing, stealing, threatening and even violence (or any, seemingly random combination of the above), all in order to get whatever it is that he may claim to want from those he bothers to speak with. Some say he's obviously a boon to Abyss Mystics, offering whatever help he can, others say they know—or used to know—a mystic of the Abyss, until they tried to do business with the Casuli, that is. Still others claim he's neither friend nor foe, but simply uninterested in the affairs of others, while even more swear he's nothing more than a rather embarrassing “urban legend” as it were. If all recorded and gossiped accounts of the Casuli were to be drawn together (a virtually impossible feat, considering the rarity of the Casuli himself and the lack of those willing to discuss such shadowy characters in the first place), he would appear as one driven, perhaps even possessed (by some accounts), to pursue and collect all Abyssal lore for himself—and himself alone. Yet at the same time, he would also appear as one whose actions and methods were as predictable as the flight of a moth, casting seemingly random threats, accusations, gratitude and even rewards around without any apparent rhyme or reason. In some regions he was reported to have been equally benevolent and demanding or unreasonable, while in others he seems as if he would have been willing to do anything just for a solid lead on whatever it was he was looking for. His name would date back to the 1600, or perhaps even earlier, yet Abyss mystics who have done their research might be aware that other, similar figures and beings have existed for at least another five centuries beforehand—possibly even throughout all portions of history in which existed the Discipline of Obtenebration. To make things even more interesting, in another 50-100 years, those same regions would be reporting altogether different results. Even if one were to achieve the Methuselean feat of correlating all sightings and dealings with this mysterious envoy of shadowy knowledge, one would probably still be just as clueless as to his true goals. Yes, his main goal seems to be the accumulation of all Abyssal lore he can find, including, but not limited to, knowledge on Abyss Mysticism—but to what end? What is the end result the Casuli seeks? What does the strange, shadowy figure actually search for in all those texts he acquires? When mystics start piecing the puzzle together, the minds of the ignorant fail to comprehend the significance of the greater picture and look away in their shame, back to the bleak traps of existence they call lives (or unlives). Said to be an unprecedented master of Obtenebrous powers, able to conjure items from shadows and summon (or banish) almost anything he wants into the Abyss, some say the Casuli can even trap its victims in the Abyss and force them to serve him long after life has left their bodies. This last, however, is something few, if any, know, as rarely does one survive a conflict with the Casuli. As for those who claim to have outright defied or attacked him... there are none currently spreading such foolhardy lies openly, but every now and then, amongst the proper circles, a rumor or two will arise of one who claims just such a thing. Any attempts to find these individuals and corroborate their stories would most likely turn up completely fruitless, however.
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